Hi Diljot, lots of good advice for healthy eating here. I definitely try to have a variety of fruit and vegetables everyday. How about you?
Great to see that you are using some text structures to organize your ideas, including a title and illustrations. I wonder if you could add comments beside your photo to give further information. For example, you could point to the carrots in your photo and give some information about why it is nutritious/ good for you.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Diljot, lots of good advice for healthy eating here. I definitely try to have a variety of fruit and vegetables everyday. How about you?
ReplyDeleteGreat to see that you are using some text structures to organize your ideas, including a title and illustrations. I wonder if you could add comments beside your photo to give further information. For example, you could point to the carrots in your photo and give some information about why it is nutritious/ good for you.