Hi Diljot, I can imagine if you had heavy lifting superpowers, you'd be able to help me carry reading journals from our resource room:)
Well done for writing about a problem (things kept breaking when your character touched them) and a resolution (he used his superpowers to help others). I wonder if you could describe your character and setting further? Did your character turn muscular when he woke up? Was your character shocked?
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Hi Diljot, I can imagine if you had heavy lifting superpowers, you'd be able to help me carry reading journals from our resource room:)
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing about a problem (things kept breaking when your character touched them) and a resolution (he used his superpowers to help others). I wonder if you could describe your character and setting further? Did your character turn muscular when he woke up? Was your character shocked?