Hi Diljot, how interesting that the boy changed his mind about being copied by people. At first, he didn't seem to like it but then he used that attention by making himself king. I'm interested find out a bit more about your setting - where did this story happen? I'm also interested to find out more about your ending - when the boy became king, what did he do with his powers? Did he try to save all the animals by making it a law that people have to eat vegetables?
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Hi Diljot, how interesting that the boy changed his mind about being copied by people. At first, he didn't seem to like it but then he used that attention by making himself king. I'm interested find out a bit more about your setting - where did this story happen? I'm also interested to find out more about your ending - when the boy became king, what did he do with his powers? Did he try to save all the animals by making it a law that people have to eat vegetables?
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