Hi Diljot, I like that you have included precise measurements (e.g. 60mL and 1 tsp) in your recipe, which is really important. I wonder if you could add a title to tell people what the recipe is about. Besides from 'add', what are some other verbs you could use to show readers what to do? Maybe you could use sift, stir, fold, beat, pour?
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ReplyDeleteHi Diljot, I like that you have included precise measurements (e.g. 60mL and 1 tsp) in your recipe, which is really important. I wonder if you could add a title to tell people what the recipe is about. Besides from 'add', what are some other verbs you could use to show readers what to do? Maybe you could use sift, stir, fold, beat, pour?
ReplyDeleteHi Diljot This is max. I like how you put them in parts. Maybe you could make some and put pictures of them?
ReplyDeletethis is cool
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