Hi Diljot, you are getting better and better at writing stories that talk about a problem and how that problem is solved. I like that you are adding interesting words too, like 'agreed', 'stabbed'. I also like that you are using different sentence starters to make your story flow.
Remember the writing task for this week was about mini beasts (little insects). What are some ways you can relate your story to this topic?
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Hi Diljot, you are getting better and better at writing stories that talk about a problem and how that problem is solved. I like that you are adding interesting words too, like 'agreed', 'stabbed'. I also like that you are using different sentence starters to make your story flow.
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