Hi Diljot, your bird feeder is beautiful. I loved how you put leaves around the bottle to make it blend into the environment.
You did a good job in your persuasive letter. I like that you used a rhetorical question to make your reader think amount the amount of rubbish in waterways. For your explanation, see if you can add more detail. You can talk about: what your water cage is made of/ what happens to the rubbish once it is in the cage.
You are becoming an expert at telling time. For slide 5, at 4:30pm, the short arm will move half way between 4 and 5.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Diljot, your bird feeder is beautiful. I loved how you put leaves around the bottle to make it blend into the environment.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job in your persuasive letter. I like that you used a rhetorical question to make your reader think amount the amount of rubbish in waterways. For your explanation, see if you can add more detail. You can talk about: what your water cage is made of/ what happens to the rubbish once it is in the cage.
You are becoming an expert at telling time. For slide 5, at 4:30pm, the short arm will move half way between 4 and 5.