I can see you were working really hard Diljot. It was special to read your pepeha and read your descriptive writing. I especially like the part about white reminding you of the dentist- that gave me a picture in my mind. I wonder if you need to check your money math problems. I got different answers to the ones that you got!!!
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I can see you were working really hard Diljot.
ReplyDeleteIt was special to read your pepeha and read your descriptive writing. I especially like the part about white reminding you of the dentist- that gave me a picture in my mind.
I wonder if you need to check your money math problems. I got different answers to the ones that you got!!!