Kia Ora Diljot, you are becoming better and better at adding detail to your writing. Good to see that you are beginning to use full stops and commas too!
I have made a little video for you to help you structure your writing, just click on the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1r6p3LKnAg8jn1qpEHA96bRN8xB4a4f0g/view
Hi Diljot, I can tell from this writing that you have a respect for other cultures. You are also really happy to learn about other cultures and join in with special activities like Kapa haka. I love kapa haka because I love singing and shouting and doing actions and it makes me feel refreshed. Keep up the great work.
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Kia Ora Diljot, you are becoming better and better at adding detail to your writing. Good to see that you are beginning to use full stops and commas too!
ReplyDeleteI have made a little video for you to help you structure your writing, just click on the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1r6p3LKnAg8jn1qpEHA96bRN8xB4a4f0g/view
Hi Diljot,
ReplyDeleteI can tell from this writing that you have a respect for other cultures. You are also really happy to learn about other cultures and join in with special activities like Kapa haka.
I love kapa haka because I love singing and shouting and doing actions and it makes me feel refreshed.
Keep up the great work.